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Suz
05-25-2003, 11:32 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/05-25-2003/1976_1_DPAL_2003_05_23_small.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: asymmetry
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Pastel
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 20x24
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
2 hour sketch.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Anything goes.

pero lane
05-25-2003, 01:16 PM
Good job on the skin tones, perhaps just a little too light on the very top of the head. Great work over all!

angelmakerla
05-25-2003, 01:21 PM
The top half of the head is slightly too small. The eye level is usually halfway between the top of the head and the bottom of the chin, especially becaue we are looking at her directly at eye level.

That's the only thing I can see so far, since this is in progress.

giniaad
05-25-2003, 01:22 PM
LOVE it!

wonderful choice of colors
love the lighting
the title
(like all of our faces)
love the elegance of the earrings
with this quirky...real...expressive/ thoughtful face

she's a beauty!

(the rules are guide lines...
not everyones face follow the rules...)

bocote
05-25-2003, 04:44 PM
this is clever. a true artists work and wonderfully pleasing to look at and study. Quirky was the word and beyond that you have a gem. If you carry the rest of the drawing as well as the face you'll have something to be very proud of.

B

jerryW
05-25-2003, 05:04 PM
Originally posted by bocote
this is clever. a true artists work and wonderfully pleasing to look at and study. Quirky was the word and beyond that you have a gem. If you carry the rest of the drawing as well as the face you'll have something to be very proud of.
B
I echo that.

Wayne Gaudon
05-25-2003, 09:37 PM
:clap: