View Full Version : ...cool waters... warm thoughts

05-22-2003, 09:39 PM

under the water you feel like morning
with all the waves grasping your hands
like school children crossing the street
impatient of the story you have to tell
what's that? you've met someone teacher?
does this mean you're going to leave?
no you promise, and they run off
never considering again
how much your heart has changed
you think to yourself, "am i different"?
have i stopped wishing for tomorrow
i use to be afraid of going this deep
surely i would drown if not come back...
and you look up to the sun and clouds
for answers they dance together to give
in the distance you hear your name
coming from the shore? by him?
smiling you turn from the sky
and its passing over what you've braved
not to be ignored, they burn the soles of your feet
for falling in love...

art: diane555 (hey I did the sky)
words: bobby 9:42pm 5/22/2003

05-23-2003, 08:27 AM
awesome collaboration!!! very touching, deeper the the water being waded in...very thought provoking!

05-23-2003, 09:41 AM
wow, exciting!

05-23-2003, 01:49 PM
Very nice!! It's great when collaborated an artwork with a poem...

Tell us what is the real meaning in short...

05-23-2003, 08:15 PM
][remble: thank you, the poem was written roughly in 15 minutes, but i like being inspired by the work, rather then write first then paint...

Luzie: yes diane555 let me do the background to her piece, which as you can see by the stages went a long way from her sketch...

gladysharon: meaning? hmm not too sure there is one, beyond what is personal to both of us... i guess i was getting at love makes you face your fears...

05-24-2003, 10:39 AM
i love this.
she, cool and composed, glances to the rippling
too absorbed in her morphing reflection
to notice
the flaming, roiling sky

05-24-2003, 11:24 AM
Thanks for all the nice comments all :) I made a line drawing of Bobby's sky design which I am using to cut all my fabrics from. Having a lot of fun with this one.


05-24-2003, 03:07 PM
looks awesome!!

im new at this site...how do i put my pic in w/ my content?

tom b

05-24-2003, 04:11 PM
Here Tom click this...

How to post images... (http://www.wetcanvas.com/forums/showthread.php?threadid=53060)


05-24-2003, 04:47 PM
Wow bobby, diane!

You two should get together with Rose Queen; she does handmade books.

This takes you to a magical world...

05-25-2003, 07:04 PM
here's Diane's update all...