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hollyaho
05-16-2003, 08:51 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/05-16-2003/21296_IMG00001.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Jimmy
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Pencil
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 11
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This was done with a #2 pencil on 70# white paper. It is not as dark as I would have liked but I don't have any darker pencils or charcoal so for now it will have to do.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I am trying to become proficient in portraits, not just showing a resemblence to the person but almost giving you an idea of the personality as well. Any help would be greatly appreciated!

jerryW
05-16-2003, 09:18 AM
this conveys the cypher of soul very well
a few well developped elements
deliver the whole.
my feeling is that outline is a bit stronger than needed