View Full Version : Knight of Cups

05-14-2003, 05:26 PM
Hay gang;

Need a fresh pair of eyes to look over my card design. I've been kinda lax in getting this done.
LMK what you think of the horse and the man. They are both out of my head.

PS if you want to see the earlier versions go here (http://www.wetcanvas.com//Community/Projects/browse_details.php?proj_id=360) and check out the progress entrys.


05-14-2003, 05:29 PM
awwww...his bridle has a little heart on it:p i like it! the guy's nose might be a bit small, tho.

Paul Hopkinson
05-14-2003, 07:08 PM
Nice work Twyla! I love this design very mythical. I suggest that you check the hight of the man's head, his eyes should be in the middle between the head and chin. I'm sure you might remember this from basic portrait work. What was it half, half and half again for the eyes, nose and center of the mouth, as a rough guide anyway!


05-14-2003, 08:31 PM
Excellent design! aside from things already mentioned, if the horse is drinking out of a stemmed goblet of some sort, as it seems, the bottom lines are off. If that's the guy's hand, it needs some sort of definition or shading so you can tell that that's what it is.

05-15-2003, 02:07 PM
This looks really cool!!! ia gree with what Paul said...also, the goblet stem seems to be curved...but maybe that's just hwo it's meant to be!
Looks great to me!!

05-16-2003, 09:34 AM
I'm just looking. Don't want to repeat what's been already said.
I really like the concept of this. Very nice.