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mpopinz
05-12-2003, 10:28 PM
Trying to paint again. What can I do to make this a better piece?


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/12-May-2003/8215-Leaves_WIP_1_WC.jpg

babybrush
05-12-2003, 10:30 PM
trying to understand what exactly i am looking at. do you have those flowers masked or are they painted green?

Bethany

mpopinz
05-12-2003, 10:33 PM
Ah Ha! Finally got the right painting. The uploader kept loading the first post.!

CharM
05-12-2003, 11:26 PM
You could add some shadowing to keep your vase from floating... and perhaps add some definition to the green jar (?) behind it...

karenboss
05-12-2003, 11:53 PM
I think it's terrific - it has a very honest expression

I agree that a shadow will help, also let the pink flowers go off the edge, and maybe add some of that pink elswere, like the table or b/g to add cohisiveness to it. -

love the stlye & composition, and expression -