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mpopinz
05-12-2003, 10:26 PM
Haven't posted in a while.. but here is something I've been working on. Will post progress & final. Critiques Encouraged, Comments Welcome!

Thanks for looking,


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/12-May-2003/8215-By_the_Window_WIP_1_-WC.jpg

CharM
05-12-2003, 11:41 PM
I really like the composition of this Iris... I'm wondering about your shadows though... It appears that your light is coming from the right...

mustcreate
05-13-2003, 11:14 AM
good start on this Iris!!

I am really liking the purple and the washy look of the glass :)

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pampe
05-13-2003, 11:23 AM
Iris


this is a good start

The composition looks good

waiting to see how you handle the color

Sylvielu
05-13-2003, 12:02 PM
This looks like a good one. I like the composition also. I also agree at this point decide which way the light is coming from.

M.A.
05-13-2003, 03:56 PM
Looking good!!!

mpopinz
05-13-2003, 04:11 PM
Okay, here is what I've finished thus far. The cluster of flowers at bottom left will be violets & babys breath. Haven't even removed the masking fluid from the leaves & stems. Still working on the flowers in the window.

What about shadow? Yes, the light source is from the right. Could it be better?

The containers are sitting on a table. Advise or suggestions, critiques on this area.

Thanks again for looking, and thanks for your help.


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/13-May-2003/8215-By_the_Window_WIP_2-wc.jpg

mpopinz
05-13-2003, 04:12 PM
I can see from just posting that the table is "out of round". I'll have to fix that!