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manwat
05-11-2003, 02:26 PM
16 x 12 Langton 140llb Extra Rough

Comments and critiques welcome.

Peter

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/11-May-2003/18980-19_carreg_cennen_.jpg

mpopinz
05-11-2003, 02:58 PM
Peter,

The depth and color in this painting are surpurb. Well done!

coffee_girl3000
05-11-2003, 03:10 PM
Great greens! Like the depth and looseness very much. IMHO the blue in the sky should either be continued into the top left or toned down. That intense corner is throwing it off a bit.

Uschi
05-11-2003, 03:19 PM
Beautiful in it's simplicity Peter!!!!
Uschi

Olga
05-11-2003, 03:24 PM
Wonderful clarity of colors and the castle is beautifully painted.

I was going to agree with Sarah and suggest cropping that blue part like that...

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/11-May-2003/7629-18980-19_carreg_cennen_crop.jpg

Having looked at it, though, I am no longer sure... That blue does play against the green...

Olga

Yorky
05-11-2003, 04:24 PM
Super job, Peter.

I tend to agree with Sarah about the sky.

Doug

lyn lynch
05-11-2003, 04:39 PM
Not, me, I love the intensity in the sky.
Great job, Peter, very pleasant viewing.

CharM
05-11-2003, 05:29 PM
I like the deep blue in the sky... It complements the luscious greens in the foregound... You could extend it to the left, but I would look at if for a few days before I did anything more with it...

lynn_cyr
05-11-2003, 06:44 PM
I love the sky just the way it is - I also love your composition in this painting. There's alot of depth going on...

Looks great! :)

Lynn

artmom
05-11-2003, 06:51 PM
I like your style--and I think the blue sky lends excitement to the painting. Definitely a British "bright spot!"

Lyn

surreal
05-11-2003, 06:55 PM
Extremely lovely!!!

froggee501
05-11-2003, 07:50 PM
very lovely, although I do agree with Char...right now, you have all of your most intense colors on the right, so it weighs the picture heavily in that direction... moving some intense blue onto the left will help it balance.