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Rod
01-20-2001, 10:21 PM
Hi Gang,
A watercolour 14 by 10 inches, main colours are Prussion blue, Rose Madder and lemon yellow,
All comments welcome,

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tammy
01-20-2001, 11:04 PM
Hi Rod,
I like the colors that you are using here.
For some reason I can't put a finger on though the face of the woman with the blue hat bothers me some. I know its hidden in the hat and the shadows of the same, but its as if her forehead has an un natural look to it.

The features of the other woman's face is exquisite.

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Rod
01-21-2001, 12:36 AM
Thanks Tammy,
I agree the form was wrong,I only just finished the painting today , so paint was still out and wet , have corrected by reshaping the forehead and adding a hint of the eye,
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billyg
01-21-2001, 05:53 AM
Hey Rod,
Now I know what you lot get up to in Kaiapoi when all the others have come up here on holiday.
Love it Rod. Its different and good. A bit 1920's in figure style but who cares. http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/biggrin.gif
Carry on the good work and Paint like a Millionaire.
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TeAnne
01-21-2001, 06:04 AM
I like, now that you have given her a face http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/smile.gif

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jerryW
01-21-2001, 06:25 AM
love the figures, foibles, and hats but not the bkgnd. I think it works great as a figure study but is not as strong as a painting - severe cropping might work or doing another with this as a reference when the whole paper becomes the issue (today I'm on a campaign about the totality of paintings).

Capart
01-21-2001, 10:10 AM
Much better now the head is fixed.
I like the background, the only thing I would do is blend in the yellow a bit more.
Well done !

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henrik
01-21-2001, 05:22 PM
Cool.
One small thing, the dark shadow under the blue lady's arm 'curves the wrong way' under the arm - if you continue the line behind her arm she would have a hump to rival Quasimodo http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/biggrin.gif
Perhaps it should look more like this...
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Impulse
01-22-2001, 12:40 AM
Excellent work. I like Henrik's improvement. http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Rod
01-22-2001, 02:04 AM
Thanks Henrik,
It sure would have been a huge hump,I should come here more often http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/smile.gif


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Danny
06-03-2001, 02:26 PM
I THink You Have One More Thing Left To Do With This. Frame It Its A Wrap And A Winner Now. http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/smile.gif