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Phillip
05-06-2003, 02:44 AM
Hi Here is a exercise I did from here, it's one of Murray's.

I draw it my self, & used a Dip Pen.

I know it's not the best, But I suppose it's a start.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/06-May-2003/21263-Rock_in_INk.jpg

seejay
05-06-2003, 07:54 AM
A good start Phillip. Looks like you lost patience with the shading in places. I never did this exercise, I forget what the lesson involved.

Maybe the 'dude himself will drop in some time to give some real help.

I know it's not the best

You can and will do better, remember that!

Cheers

Phillip
05-06-2003, 08:23 AM
Originally posted by seejay
A good start Phillip. Looks like you lost patience with the shading in places. I never did this exercise, I forget what the lesson involved.

Maybe the 'dude himself will drop in some time to give some real help.



You can and will do better, remember that!

Cheers

Hi Chris.

Looks more like a tree don't it., Maybe it's suppose to be a tree.

I had visitors over half way through painting so kind of rushed it.

jjsangel
05-06-2003, 08:34 AM
It is actually a tree stump Phillip. You did a very nice job drawing it freehand. I printed it out and did the linework for that project. I like that you did it freehand.

artdude
05-06-2003, 11:58 AM
Pretty good freehand drawing of the Deadwood demo :) Looks like you got off to a good start and you ended up rushing the last bit. Still, you did a nice job with it :D Maybe download the line drawing I have in the article and try that if you like :D:)

Phillip
05-06-2003, 06:13 PM
Thanks for the comments.

Where does it need more work??

rapolina
05-07-2003, 06:45 AM
beautiful and interesting!

;) do you think that i ate or smoked something strange if I say that i can see in it a lot of faces, human and animals?
that's true, anytime i look at it i discover someone new!

send more philip!:) :)

ciao, rapolina.

mel-ink
05-07-2003, 09:10 AM
A good start! Looking forward to seeing more of your work!

:clap: :clap: :clap:

artdude
05-07-2003, 11:13 AM
Originally posted by Phillip
Thanks for the comments.

Where does it need more work??

Hi Phillip. Try to have a bit more control with your contour lines. Your drawing is good but a lot of your line work is very loose. Try to follow the contours of the wood. Look at how close or far apart the lines are and also pay attention to the direction of the contour line :D:)

drwells
05-07-2003, 07:32 PM
do you think that i ate or smoked something strange if I say that i can see in it a lot of faces, human and animals?

Well, I saw the same thing. :D

Philip, nice job...just s l o w down. (wink)

Hope to see the next try. :)

Danny