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silysara
05-05-2003, 03:08 PM
I know I should be working on a portraite.... I have one picked out and starting it today ;)
Had to post these tulips for some hekp on them.
Darker background?
Tell me what you all think
Sara

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/05-May-2003/18315-Tulip_in_vase.jpg

mpopinz
05-05-2003, 03:15 PM
Hi,
Your painting is very good. Nice bright colors, but the Tulips look like they'll be getting thirsty. Could you add a bit of water to that vase?

Nitsa
05-05-2003, 05:53 PM
Nice bold painting Sara.....I have a problem with the ovals on your vase however, perspective looks out to me?

*Warning.....If you add water to the vase now, it should effect the stems and the way the are cast in the vase, water "bends" stems!

silysara
05-05-2003, 07:37 PM
I thought about the water addition..... I sort-of bent the stems already, at the top of the vase.... How about.....the vase is full to the top with water!?!
When I look at it...the whole thing takes a lean to the right.

Thanks for the lookies.
Sara

Sandy1
05-05-2003, 08:21 PM
Nice job. Like the nice bright colours. I have yet to try flowers in a vase with water. You did great on what I think is a difficult subject.
Sandy

Little Old Lady
05-05-2003, 08:36 PM
Lovely flowers. I agree that the perspective on the vase is wrong.
JoAnn

pampe
05-05-2003, 09:32 PM
agree with the above comments


too PRIMARY

get some variation in there:)