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guilliame
05-04-2003, 07:25 AM
Well it might not be as dreamy and floaty as the 1st one but tried to punch up the colour a bit,hope you like it:D

Redsy333
05-04-2003, 08:28 AM
Oh Guilli that water is delicious! You definately have a more3d effect now;)
great work!!

E-J
05-05-2003, 05:37 AM
I'm not sure I saw your other version, but I like this one very much, guilli ~ it really gives a great sense of the surface of the water ~ 3D, as Redsy says. I like the way you've used the reds.

jackiesimmonds
05-06-2003, 02:58 AM
Lovely feeling of the water surface. However.........I still have issues with the composition. It is absolutely 50/50, half water, half foliage.

Why not consider a crop from the top?

Jackie

guilliame
05-06-2003, 11:40 AM
Glad you all liked the water:D
Redsy thanks for input to shade and include more W/L bottom right.
Thanks EJ you might still be able to find the 1st one page 4/5?just called W/L on pond.
Jackie,shoot you are right,i had that in mind when i redrew it but i got so carried away trying to punch up the colour and contrasts i didn't notice,i still have 2 inches on the bottom to paint in more W/L and water and of course i can still crop of the top,thanks for bringing it to my attention:)

meowmeow
05-06-2003, 12:37 PM
Great watery effect...I love how the lilies are really just floating there!

SAndy