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05-02-2003, 04:12 PM
05-02-2003, 04:27 PM
what size is this?
are you looking for critique?
05-02-2003, 04:50 PM
Hi I like your style and uniqueness. However I find myself turning sideways trying to read the music notes.
Maybe you could do another and have the music connected to the flowers diagonally.
This way the looker sees a connection and the eye is lead to both subjects.
05-02-2003, 05:16 PM
Is that the music to "tip toe thru the tulips"?
I'm in agreement with Sylvielu
05-02-2003, 05:47 PM
William--very nice colors! I can't read music, so it doesn't bother me to have the music on the side--I assume that it is bird song, anyway. It is definitely springlike!
05-02-2003, 05:50 PM
I like the concept of this one a lot
The components seem a bit disconnected from each other
I think it might work better if they were somehow connected (IMHO)
05-02-2003, 08:05 PM
You have a great start here! And, you've received good advice... You are clearly talented and imaginative! I love the concept of what you are portraying!! This has a lyrical quality about it and your style is nice and loose...
Little Old Lady
05-02-2003, 08:11 PM
Interesting idea and loose flowers. Good suggestions.
05-02-2003, 08:24 PM
William" A beautiful painting .
I would like to see what you can do to bring both aspects of the painting together. " in perfect harmony" Oh, I think that phrase was used by Mc Cartney and Wonder. I will use it anyways.
and I am sure you will get my drift.
I love the simplicity of both the flowers and the bar of music. With yourwonderful imagination you can bring it together.
05-02-2003, 10:11 PM
This is very nice....well done...:)
05-03-2003, 04:56 AM
I agree with everyone else. But I would do the notes diagnally so that you aren't tweaking head to side to try to read.
05-06-2003, 08:49 AM
:clap: :clap: nice and unusual!
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