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William Reents
05-02-2003, 04:12 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/02-May-2003/21923-Prince_of_tex.jpg

pampe
05-02-2003, 04:27 PM
Hi, William

what size is this?

are you looking for critique?

Sylvielu
05-02-2003, 04:50 PM
Hi I like your style and uniqueness. However I find myself turning sideways trying to read the music notes.

Maybe you could do another and have the music connected to the flowers diagonally.

This way the looker sees a connection and the eye is lead to both subjects.

seedy
05-02-2003, 05:16 PM
Is that the music to "tip toe thru the tulips"?
I'm in agreement with Sylvielu
Brian

artmom
05-02-2003, 05:47 PM
William--very nice colors! I can't read music, so it doesn't bother me to have the music on the side--I assume that it is bird song, anyway. It is definitely springlike!

Lyn

pampe
05-02-2003, 05:50 PM
William

I like the concept of this one a lot

The components seem a bit disconnected from each other

I think it might work better if they were somehow connected (IMHO)


Pam

CharM
05-02-2003, 08:05 PM
You have a great start here! And, you've received good advice... You are clearly talented and imaginative! I love the concept of what you are portraying!! This has a lyrical quality about it and your style is nice and loose...

Little Old Lady
05-02-2003, 08:11 PM
Interesting idea and loose flowers. Good suggestions.
JoAnn

Strawberry Wine
05-02-2003, 08:24 PM
William" A beautiful painting .


I would like to see what you can do to bring both aspects of the painting together. " in perfect harmony" Oh, I think that phrase was used by Mc Cartney and Wonder. I will use it anyways.
and I am sure you will get my drift.

I love the simplicity of both the flowers and the bar of music. With yourwonderful imagination you can bring it together.

Gail

taghera
05-02-2003, 10:11 PM
This is very nice....well done...:)

eelfish1
05-03-2003, 04:56 AM
I agree with everyone else. But I would do the notes diagnally so that you aren't tweaking head to side to try to read.

Dot

rapolina
05-06-2003, 08:49 AM
:clap: :clap: nice and unusual!
ciao, rapolina.