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05-02-2003, 06:55 AM
Hello again.

I said that I will post a update of this boat painting of mine at this forum

I took some of the suggestions mentioned.

It's still not finished, I need to Finnish the water. I was not happy with the original water. So I wiped it back & going to have another go.

Any comments on what I should do with the water??


05-02-2003, 08:40 AM
much smoother lines on the boat now. like what you are doing with it


05-02-2003, 09:30 AM
Very nice!


05-02-2003, 12:27 PM
Much better Phillip.

05-03-2003, 09:40 AM
Thank you Bethany, Artmom & Jprice022 for your comments,
very much apreciated.

You know I always thought something was wrong with this painting, I just could not figure it out.

After looking at it most days, I think I picked what it is that bothers me, Look at the distant mountain & shoreline. :straight across the middle of the paper. I cut it in half, which is a no no in compositions, I think.
I should of had it a third down from the top of paper, but than I would loose some of the sky. Which I think really makes this painting.