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fink
05-22-2001, 10:30 PM
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I did this one a year or so ago. Just posted this to see if you say the same thing that I think about it. (Chuckle chuckle)

Thanks for looking.

dornberg
05-22-2001, 10:44 PM
i think the colors and handling of the flowers is good
some more descrption of the area between the flowers and house might be interesting

Suz
05-22-2001, 10:45 PM
Very nice piece.

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wendee
05-23-2001, 03:59 AM
I think is is really lovely http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/smile.gif

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ArtyHelen
05-23-2001, 06:35 AM
Huge giant killer plant! http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/biggrin.gif
But I like it anyway! http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/wink.gif

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fink
05-23-2001, 07:59 AM
Thanks for the comments. I thought after I had finished it that the house should have been less dominant so the flowers were the main thing that you focus on. Right now it seems that you bounce back and forth between the flowers and house.

TeAnne
05-23-2001, 08:24 AM
Hey this is excellent, I love the composition and how your brought the flowers into my face. WOW http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/evilgrin.gif

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henrik
05-23-2001, 09:07 AM
fink, agree with you... My first reaction was "The house that the monster lilacs killed". Besides the big diference in proportions - the house and lilacs do create a ping pong effect; a third element could fix that.
Something like a fence running from foreground to background could perhaps connect the two - perhaps also adding some small distant flowers wold help the viwer get the proportions right. Here is an attempt to show the idea...
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(yuck what an ugly fence I made...)

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rsmak
05-23-2001, 10:06 AM
This is beautiful,I think the middle part of the flower is too waterly,but I like the colour

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JeanineJ
05-23-2001, 10:09 AM
Ahhhh! I needed this painting! Henrik improved a beauty...

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fink
05-23-2001, 10:57 PM
Oh yea I like the suggestion about the fence. Now I'll take it apart and get the old toothbrush after it and change change change.

Thanks!!!!!!

JaneS
05-23-2001, 11:39 PM
Nice colors. I think the composition is evocative. Perhaps even a few lilacs in that empty corner would give the impression that you were just peaking over the tops of a big bush and catching a view of that house. Reminds me of Iowa. http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/smile.gif

omg! I just see now that you are IN Iowa.....! lol

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