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lotsofsmoggies
03-16-2012, 05:34 AM
Not sure on the nose or the eye. Help would be good. :wave:


Mainly fb polychromos cp with a couple of pablo's and a prisma thrown in, on cartridge paper.


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/16-Mar-2012/985781-001.JPG



http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/16-Mar-2012/985781-002.JPG



http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/16-Mar-2012/985781-003.JPG

KarenESP
03-16-2012, 08:37 AM
Oh wow! Hadn't caught the final photo. That turned out really nice and the fur is great! So many colors and the realistic way in which you styled it. Nice work! :clap: :thumbsup:

mcassatt
03-16-2012, 08:48 AM
Wow, lots of detail. What I think needs improving on is the chin. My eyes go straight to that area. Then the other thing is more lights/darks. Everything is falling into the middle range making it look flat. I think that might be the problem you noticed w/nose. The hairs definition is great. I like how you've got different direction w/pencil strokes on the way the hairs lay. It's got real potential. I know you were hoping to be finished. I find it hard to be patient too. Hope you take this as constructive c&c.

lotsofsmoggies
03-16-2012, 11:54 AM
I know what you mean. Its the first area your eye catches.

This was the original picture of Amber.


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/16-Mar-2012/985781-Amber_1.1.jpg


Even just seeing that before I post this reply, I can see that values need to worked on. Back to it tonight then. :thumbsup:

evartpat
03-16-2012, 12:00 PM
Looking good. :)

I have to agree about the chin though. Even though the photo kind of looks that way, maybe you can tone it down a bit.

That fur coloration isn't easy to do...what a challenge!!

lotsofsmoggies
03-16-2012, 04:43 PM
Done some more, think it looks better.


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/16-Mar-2012/985781-005.JPG


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/16-Mar-2012/985781-006.JPG

Barb'sArt
03-17-2012, 12:08 AM
Hi Annie,
I think you done a wonderful job on your Amber.
I think if you would add a shadowed aread under the chin(as reflected in the photo), it might help to decrease the eye from going straight to that chin area.
lovely detail!

mcassatt
03-21-2012, 08:54 PM
I can see from the photo how the chins giving you problems. I think if it were me, I'd forget about how it looks in the photo and pencil in from another photo of another cat w/out calico look. I mean not two toned, it's confusing and an eye magnet.