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Kashifa
05-22-2001, 01:10 PM
Hi Focks,
This is first time that i am seanding my image for critique in this great site. I am senior student of it.
Their is my image. Any comments good or bad will really help me. But i am quite consider on its EYElevel. I create it through photo.

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Ladysue
05-22-2001, 01:58 PM
Welcome to Wetcanvas!
You'll see, people are wild yet nice in here.

Nice work on this still life, I like the different textures on the vases and on the table.
I'm not a pro myself so take my suggestions with a grain of salt. The one thing I can see is that the perspective of the vase base ( the vase on the far right) does not match the rest of the painting. http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/confused.gif The right half orange patern on the vase in the far left is also different from the left one. Otherwise, the light and textures are great. http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/smile.gif

Keep posting!





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ZOTMA
05-22-2001, 02:36 PM
Neat choice of vessels for the still life. Nice rendering and I agree that the perspective on the last vessel is a bit different (evident at the base). Good work and would love to see more of your stuff.

dornberg
05-22-2001, 04:17 PM
i think the picture has rhythm
there is pepetition of the curvy vase tops
there is repetition of the circular forms
and in the horizontal

TeAnne
05-22-2001, 06:36 PM
Welcome to WC. This is very striking. http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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tammy
05-22-2001, 08:49 PM
Very nice. It looks a little slanted to me but perhaps it wasn't quite straight on the scanner.
Post more work. We'd love to see it.

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Impulse
05-22-2001, 11:45 PM
Welcome to Wetcanvas. Lovely work. Stunning detail. Great colour. I see loads of talent. http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Rahat Ayub
05-22-2001, 11:51 PM
I loved the Smooth blend of colours...Its a wonderful work...Want to see more of your pictures.

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rsmak
05-23-2001, 12:12 AM
excellent,I love it...
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henrik
05-23-2001, 08:53 AM
Very good! I like the colors, light and atmosphere. There are some minor things to consider. The perspecitve is off on the bottom of the objects (this is the only 'error'). I think the sense of depth could be improved by letting objects overlap more; now they just touch the edges of eachother.

Here is an edited image to show what a bit more overlap could look like. The edits are a bit sloppy. What I did was to move the black (leftmost) jug to the right and I lowered the right plate (thereby also making it somewhat egg-shaped :eek http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/smile.gif
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Kashifa
05-23-2001, 09:43 AM
Hello gang;
Thank you all for yours great response. Your all suggestions really help me to understand my own work.
In this painting, I will give more attention to the far right black vase Perspective.
Thank you Henrik, I noted your all corrections and I try to improve it. Its colors, light and atmosphere really make me love this work.
Thank you again.:)
See you soon

Kashifa
07-18-2001, 02:12 PM
Antique
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/18-Jul-2001/Antiqueweb.jpg

i try to work on it.