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pl_kpprt
05-01-2003, 06:01 PM
Hahnmuhle 300 lb paper, 15 x 20.
As always, suggestions and critique are most welcome!

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/01-May-2003/10305-springtime.jpg

Nitsa
05-01-2003, 06:06 PM
The flowers are beautiful, so frsh looking and I love the white flowers in the arrangement!
IMHO, the book looks like it's about to slide off the table......Railings in the background add a nice touch!

artmom
05-01-2003, 08:15 PM
Very nice! Is this a scan--it seems a little dark!

I agree about the book.

Thanks for sharing.

Lyn

CharM
05-01-2003, 08:22 PM
Actually, I find the book distracting... The flowers, vase and teacup are absolutely beautiful... The book does not appear to be part of that grouping... Sorry...

M.A.
05-01-2003, 08:38 PM
Beautiful!

Little Old Lady
05-01-2003, 08:44 PM
Wonderful flowwers and tea cup. I agree about the book. I would suggest a crop and rub out.
JoAnn

pl_kpprt
05-02-2003, 02:12 PM
Anita, fun2cook, Joann, Char and Lyn thanks for looking
and commenting.
Your remarks on the book were very valuable.
Indeed, the book is too isolated, it's not connected with the
other items of the painting.
Next time I'll pay more attention to the overall composition.

Gilberte
05-02-2003, 02:18 PM
Welcome back with another painting. I see the workshop's influence on the work out of the flowers ... good ! Agree somewhat about the comment on the book ... Keep it up Paula !

salmon
05-02-2003, 03:47 PM
Hi Paula,
apart from what has already been mentioned, I feel the vase is too close to the edge of the table. It makes me feel a little uneasy. I'm worried it may get pushed off.

painterbear
05-02-2003, 04:42 PM
Hello Paula,

Nice to see one of your paintings again. Your bouguet is filled with wonderful spring flowers, nicely composed and painted. I like the suggestion of a railing in shadow across the back of the painting.

Perhaps you could add something between the vase and the book to bring the book into the arrangement more.

pl_kpprt
05-03-2003, 02:33 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/03-May-2003/10305-Students_Student_prv.gifGilberte,Salmon and Painterbear thanks for looking and commenting!

Olga
05-03-2003, 02:41 PM
NIce work on the flowers :)
The book does not bother me at all--though it's not overlapping with the other objects I think the colors keep it together and it balances the other objects.
The vase and cup being on the very edge, though, do look a bit distrubing though. I keep wanting to move them over so they don't fall...

Olga

Bill J
05-03-2003, 06:59 PM
I'm a newbie but usually when I sit down to have a cup of tea there is always at least one book on the table so things look natural to me in the pic. The flowers are georgious

pl_kpprt
05-04-2003, 12:47 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/04-May-2003/10305-hello_LEUKE_ANIMATIE.gifOLGA and BILL,
thanks for looking and your nice compliments on my watercolor.