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carolinewardle
05-22-2001, 03:03 AM
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This is an acrylic painting 30*20 inches. I would welcome critiques. Thanks a million. Caroline

<FONT COLOR="red">Caroline, in order for everyone to be able to view your entire image, please ensure it is no larger than 500 pixels in width or height. I'ver resized this one and uploaded it again. Thanks! -- Roan</FONT c>

[This message has been edited by Roan (edited May 22, 2001).]

ArtyHelen
05-22-2001, 07:08 AM
Lovely colours!
The way the flowers are so very uniformly lined up at the bottom left is bothering me a bit...
By the way, may be a daft question, but where's the sphinx??

Helen


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dornberg
05-22-2001, 04:13 PM
i like the way the red relates in the foreground to the other floers on the left
and the yellow stars to the yellow in the foreground flower
you have a lot going off the bottom side of the painting
would it work to have a similar amount of activity going off the upper side
maybe one of the other sides too?
maybe just doing more stars would increase the upper activity

tammy
05-22-2001, 08:31 PM
I think the flowers are called sphink's right?

I like this one, only one thing. The stars seems to circle the biggest flower. Was that meant to be?

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Impulse
05-22-2001, 09:43 PM
i see flowers all over the sky. lovely. http://www.wetcanvas.com/ubb/smile.gif

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