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pampe
04-30-2003, 05:19 PM
1/4 sheet

Arches CP 140 lb

11 x 15 inches

comments welcomed


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/30-Apr-2003/4054-afterthegame.jpg

Nitsa
04-30-2003, 05:23 PM
Welcome back Pampe!
It took me a while to recognise the glove to be honest but then I am no golfer! Your texture on the balls in wonderful!

pampe
04-30-2003, 06:16 PM
thanks, Anita...the photo is not great...

lyn lynch
04-30-2003, 06:19 PM
Looking good: wood, glove, scorecard, balls, T[?]
I don't no nothing bout shadows, but the projection of the club handle don't seem to belong there.
Nice to see your smiling face and *massive hips*

tigre255
04-30-2003, 06:58 PM
Nice one Pam........can't let my dad see this or I'll be painting golf clubs too........lol he love to play.......

It's bad enough he's after me to paint trains........naw not me......hehehehehehe ofcourse golf clubs look like they might be not to bad to do......

:clap: :clap: :clap:

surreal
04-30-2003, 06:59 PM
Very nice and bold image!

pampe
04-30-2003, 08:30 PM
fooks...shadow looks like that...really....wood is crooked


thanks, Barb...won't show him


Thanks, Nina

Little Old Lady
04-30-2003, 08:48 PM
Welcome back. Looks great to me!
JoAnn

pampe
04-30-2003, 09:02 PM
thanks, JoA


missed you too

JanJones
04-30-2003, 09:03 PM
Good one. The colors are great.

mpopinz
04-30-2003, 09:43 PM
Welcome back Pam..

This is another good painting.

Love your choice of colors.

pampe
04-30-2003, 09:43 PM
thanks, Jan

madmum
05-01-2003, 03:49 AM
A new Pam painting :D

Not a golfer, but will say what I see :)

Golf balls look very good, great texture on background,

think metal club head could use more indication that it is metal, reflections of golf balls I can see but maybe more dark reflections of surroundings and highlights are needed?

Not sure about shadow from club handle, seems light on gloves then extremely dark and too narrow on floor.

Nice detail with scorecard :)

Should think this subject would have good market?

Ruth

painterbear
05-01-2003, 06:50 AM
Hi Pam,

I like this a lot. The colors and the way they flow into one another are very nice, especially on the boards of the wall (or fence) that the club is leaning on.

The shadows seem a little dark and sharp, but that is a minor nit. Overall, I think this should do quite well with the golfing community.

artmom
05-01-2003, 06:58 AM
Pam,

Great colors. Interesting viewpoint.

I am having trouble "reading" some of the objects. Is the glove on top of a score card? Is that a ball marker that looks like it is coming out of the top of the ball?

I'm not going to let my husband see it either or I'll be painting golfing equipment before I know it. Ed, both sons, and my grandson all play--so, that would make 4 or should I say "fore?" Sorry:o

Glad to see you back painting!

Lyn

Bill J
05-01-2003, 07:46 AM
Looks like one of those metal woods! (only in golf can you call it a metal wood lol!)
bill


I am drawn to art:)

Crystal Owl
05-01-2003, 08:03 AM
Welcome back Pam missed you! This looks great to me. The glove could use a tad more color I think.

Irene

Uschi
05-01-2003, 09:28 AM
1. I can tell what's on your mind Pam.
2. I knew it wouldn't be long before we saw a pampe painting
3. It's sunny:D :D :D

4. Don't know the first thing about golf, but it tells the story and I like it!!!! The only nit I have is, I think the back wall could do with another coat of something.
Uschi

pampe
05-01-2003, 10:05 AM
Ruth, metal is non-reflective in a golf club.....:eek:

thanks, syl

lyn, no marker...I'll post a better photo today

thanks, Bill

Irene....the glove pains me greatly!

Usch...afraid it will take away from the center of interest...but you may be right


close up

pampe
05-01-2003, 10:07 AM
reference photo

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/01-May-2003/4054-golf1.jpg

Uschi
05-01-2003, 11:56 AM
Pam, I meant to subdue the two vertical red stripes that draw your eye.
Uschi

artmom
05-01-2003, 12:15 PM
Pampe:o

In the photograph, I can see that what I thought was a ball marker was part of the scorecard--I think my eyes are going! along with everything else! ROFLOL

The composition is excellent.

Lyn

Little Old Lady
05-01-2003, 12:23 PM
I like the cropped version better.
JoAnn

mchew
05-01-2003, 12:29 PM
Nice to have you back, Pam.

Not a golf person either... but I understand the game a bit... par, birdie all those stuff. (learnt from computer games, lol)

OK, back to your painting... Interesting subject and composition..... should paint more and sell at clubhouse, driving range, etc.

I think you need more DARKS on the left side of the club to make it rounder. Golf balls look great... had a hard time telling it's glove too. Need more darks for shadow casted by glove on the scorecard to make card looked under the glove.

seedy
05-01-2003, 12:51 PM
Allright ....more good golf stuff.
Got my gin and tonic (first of the day) and I'm ready.
Glad you cropped that...looked like blood on the back wall. Thought somebody might have been hit by the guy in MKathleen's painting from Arizona....
How come the club in the photo is clean but there is rust on the one in the painting?
You seem to have picked a really hard arrangement to paint. What I mean is this. Would anyone leave a scorecard,two balls and a glove stacked so neatly beside their club on the floor?
Obviously you had no trouble painting this, since you have accurately painted what you saw...except for the back wall (lol).
I think the subject matter is great...I can see a
really great painting of just the glove, scorecard, three balls and maybe some white tees, all sidelit with some dramatic shadows.
Don't call it "Priceless"!
If you don't, I will.....
Will post another golf thing...your turn to critique.
Maybe we could start a new category..Wet Canvas Society for Watercolor Golf Nuts...

pampe
05-01-2003, 02:00 PM
thanks, lyn

JoA..thanks for the honesty

thanks, Marvin...will check club


seedy..thanks for the comments...it was me who left them like that...so yes, I guess "someone" would

CharM
05-01-2003, 10:08 PM
Pam, your composition was really a difficult one and you did pull it off... I do prefer the cropped version, though! Glad you're back...

pampe
05-02-2003, 11:24 AM
thanks, char

I'll have to consider the crop, I guess

artmom
05-02-2003, 11:41 AM
Pam, I thought that was a closeup--NOT a crop? I liked the original composition!

Lyn

Borum
05-02-2003, 02:03 PM
As an avid golfer just wonderful! Can I have it?

pampe
05-02-2003, 02:16 PM
well, it was a close-up, lyn, yes

Borum...of course you can have it......$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$ ;)

Patrick Marion
05-03-2003, 10:30 AM
I just wanted to be sneaky and pull this post back to the top.

Why?...because it deserves it.

I can see your palatte here again Pam.

Beautiful colors. I really like the way they
soften the whole picture.

Yepper...I'm a golfer too!

Maxfli...Titlist...La Jolla...You name dropper you!

LOL:D

Another beauty.

pampe
05-03-2003, 02:17 PM
heheh

thanks, Patrick...how'd you know it was a Lajolla....oh, the ref pic....


got a new putter this week....they are shortening the shaft and I will use it today...maybe another picture!;)