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Slowdown
04-30-2003, 06:28 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-30-2003/9274_dancing_poppies.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Springs Dance
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 21
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Done from a photo that I took of a field of poppies. I have also posted this in the oils forum.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Do you think that there is something missing in this piece? I was happy with it, but now feel that i have missed something out.

jerryW
04-30-2003, 06:47 AM
fine as is
probably better to see in real life.
an abstract of red white and green waves forms
maybe that could be accentuated, hard to say

bocote
05-01-2003, 10:57 PM
I'm happy with this one as is. Dont add anything please. Composition is simple yet fullfilling. Colors are bold and speak near the truth, but not quite a full story.

have fun,

Bocote