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artinoils
04-29-2003, 10:52 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-29-2003/7970_tapestry517.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Tapestry
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Oil
Surface: Board
Dimension: 12 x 12
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Something different...almost alla prima...added some touches.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Is it working...or not?
Critique please

Wes Hyde
04-29-2003, 11:05 PM
I'd say it's working, yes. I like the farmland scene. I would like to see more variation in color withing the individual trees tho. The reds with some burnt sienna brushed in, the blues with some greens, some ochres and browns in the yellows. The water might benefit from a little violet.

But overall, I like it a lot.

Wes

artbabe21
04-29-2003, 11:14 PM
like this a lot, the softness is so appealing & terrific color harmony

s-augustson
04-29-2003, 11:21 PM
HOOAH! Its working for me. I love the view from this angle.

Country roads...take me home...to the place...where I belong...

reynolds
04-30-2003, 01:27 AM
my eye was drawn nicely around the entire work with the colors and their intensity fading in and out...

Paintonbrush
04-30-2003, 09:27 AM
Gleefull landscape well placed. just enough of everything

woodguy
04-30-2003, 11:16 AM
Soft and mellow! I like this alot. Jim

Gilberte
04-30-2003, 03:42 PM
Very pleasing ... could be painted here in flat, flat Flanders !

coulter
04-30-2003, 09:01 PM
Beautiful, it's working beautifully!

Mark

YLCIA
04-30-2003, 10:13 PM
Very lovely, very soft . Wonderful colors.:)

Julia

artinoils
05-01-2003, 03:16 PM
Wes, I had more and then messed with it I think destoying some of what was there...thanks for pointing that out...I'll see what I can do.
Cath, thank you.
Shawn, :D actually the angle is from a plane window aproaching landing...its Virginia in the fall.
Reynolds, was hoping for that.
Dianne, Jim, Gilberte, Mark and Julia, thank you all :D

bocote
05-01-2003, 10:12 PM
Those crimsons so bold its a chance. It payed off on this one I feel. Very nice work and great composition. I feel like a diety looking at this with the ability to pick up and move buildings and lakes on a whim.

great stuff. more!

have fun,

Bocote