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rsmak
05-18-2001, 10:32 AM
This is painted on watercolour paper,8x11",please critique.
rosanna

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jerryW
05-18-2001, 10:55 AM
I would say it has chi.

ArtyHelen
05-18-2001, 11:20 AM
One of your best, IMHO! Great work!

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cleo
05-18-2001, 01:17 PM
Just a tad more richness in the bloom in
the right spot. or bleach out the very dark
green leaf a little.

Very exciting!

cleo

rsmak
05-18-2001, 02:41 PM
Originally posted by jerryW:
I would say it has chi.
Thanks,jerry.
rosanna.

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bbbilly1326
05-18-2001, 03:02 PM
Beautiful colors, delicacy and balance Rosanna. You're getting better all the time!

Bill

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rsmak
05-18-2001, 06:37 PM
Thanks you all f0r the comments.
rosanna

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fink
05-18-2001, 06:41 PM
I love the colors. Perhaps the stem could be moved from the bottom left corner. I always have trouble with the corners - ovals would sure be easier. Very Nice!

rsmak
05-18-2001, 09:32 PM
Thanks,fink.
rosanna

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dghoweth
05-18-2001, 09:58 PM
I agree the dark leaf is alittle to dark other wise great!!!!!

bruin70
05-18-2001, 10:08 PM
very nice. i think the leaves are a bit too dark and "heavy" for the painting. they compete with the flower.

if, however, you wanted to show the delicacy of the flower, think about making the leaves even heavier without being too distracting....{M}

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rsmak
05-18-2001, 10:35 PM
thanks,dghoweth,
thanks,bruin.
rosanna

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atont
05-18-2001, 11:05 PM
So delicately rendered. Another in your beautiful collection - I'm becoming a real fan!

rsmak
05-19-2001, 01:43 AM
Thanks,atont.
rosanna

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rsmak
05-19-2001, 11:33 AM
Originally posted by fink:
I love the colors. Perhaps the stem could be moved from the bottom left corner. I always have trouble with the corners - ovals would sure be easier. Very Nice!
Dear fink. for a second thought.the stem shape will add some style to the whole picture, I like the way it is ,but one leaf is too dark which i aree with.
rosanna



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JeanineJ
05-19-2001, 01:20 PM
Another beauty!
I agree with the comment to add a spot of slightly darker value somewhere toward the middle of your flower... Should balance the whole painting...

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rsmak
05-19-2001, 07:12 PM
Thanks, jeanine
rosanna

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