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Astur
04-28-2003, 02:59 AM
Hi:

Watercolor, 50 x 30 cm on Paperlan handmade paper, from one of my pics I took in Fontan Market - Oviedo - Asturias

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/28-Apr-2003/3741-fontan_paraguas2.jpg

Second version form a different point of view, well, buildings are not falling on this one... what do you think?? As usual, critiques, coments and advice will be very apreciated

You can see the reference pics here:

http://www.wetcanvas.com/RefLib/showphoto.php?photo=14090&papass=&sort=1

See you

Yorky
04-28-2003, 03:44 AM
I think this is a much better composition than the first one, Hector.

I think the main subject - the umbrellas could be a little more defined though.

Doug

M.A.
04-28-2003, 05:50 AM
Hector, I really like this a lot.

artmom
04-28-2003, 06:17 AM
Hector, wonderful color! :)

However, I echo Yorky--the umbrella stand needs to be more defined. Also, perhaps the color in your buildings is competing too much with the color in the umbrellas. Now, if the mauve building in the center is the focal point, it's all okay--if not, if the market is the focal pint, tone down the mauve a little.

I love this subject!

Lyn

CharM
04-28-2003, 08:23 AM
Hector, I like this composition... And it's beautifully colourful!!!Actually, I liked the first one too... Each stands on its own merit... With this one, there does not appear to be much variation in value, so I also feel as though the buildings are competing with the umbrellas...

Phillip
04-28-2003, 09:04 AM
Nope buildings not falling here.

Great job.

babybrush
04-28-2003, 09:08 AM
great job. definitly like this one better. looks like you cut out all the unecessary clutter from the photo. turned out great

Bethany

Little Old Lady
04-28-2003, 09:13 AM
Wonderful loose painting. I do agree that the umbrellas need a litttle defining. Maybe just a few ink lines would do it.
JoAnn

ripvanblair
04-28-2003, 09:36 AM
I agree with Doug this is much better Hector------well done------------Alan

Astur
04-28-2003, 02:33 PM
Thank you all for the comments

See you

Aselka
04-28-2003, 03:40 PM
Great composition and bright vivid color.
I think suggest to create more contrast in values between foreground and background.

Aselka