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santanuke
04-27-2003, 01:34 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-27-2003/9982_A_scene_in_front_of_my_house1.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: A scene in front of my house
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Pastel
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 8 X 10 inches
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This an unfinished drawing which I registered from the view which is seen from my house. I have added some contrast digitally.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Please comment ..

USA
04-27-2003, 11:40 PM
Nice work.

I am not one to critique but you asked for comments so...

I am not sure where your light source is coming from. Maybe some darker shadows on the ground by the shed next to the bike.

The two main trees would look better if they weren't placed on the same plain, maybe bring one forward a little to create depth.

Maybe some highlight on the dark patch of leaves at the bottom of the tree on the left.

I like your different greens. The palm is really nice. Overall it is a nice composition and a great start.

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santanuke
04-28-2003, 12:47 AM
Thank you for your valued suggestion. I have also noticed the same things. Actually I took quite a long time to come to this stage, and light was changing in live situation. I will add some shadows for the tree and the rickshaw... as you say.