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Luzie
04-26-2003, 11:19 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-26-2003/16199_DSC00002.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Help...oranges
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 20x24
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Ok, wanted to do things differently, no sketch and from life...I am into this 2 hours now, well when you want to be lose you might create a looser...major messup, so frustrated I am eating the model right now (but have replacement...)

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Composition is too cramped? Needs to be cropped?Needs to visit the garbage can? Anything would be helpful, you may be brutal:-)

harv
04-27-2003, 03:23 PM
Its good - but all the objects are bunched together in the middle - the oranges are clinging to the jug - they looked too scared to move out into the rest of the picture. Try and plan your composition next time and have some things coming off the edges or things closer in the foreground etc. Also you could play around with lighting in order to create more contrast.
Hope this helps.