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Wayne Gaudon
04-26-2003, 09:58 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-26-2003/5946_Spinging_For_Blue_Skies.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Blue Sky Of Spring
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Oil
Surface: Board
Dimension: 11 x 14
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
From a photo taken on Thursday.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
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reynolds
04-26-2003, 11:09 PM
a very grounded representation of the JOY that we feel when spring arrives after the cold and dark of winter...very nice, another work that has a break thru quality to it.

Wayne Gaudon
04-27-2003, 06:21 AM
thank you ..

coulter
04-27-2003, 06:20 PM
I wanna say the trees are too much the same, but there's so much good going on here, whew! Very nice Wayne, very nice!


Mark

mattlart
04-27-2003, 07:21 PM
..Someone is going to fall IN LOVE with that Carribean blue sky!

You've also really honed in on the color,..and feeling of light ,..and the varied textures on the road/ foreground.
Good Job,.Wayne..:D

woodguy
04-27-2003, 08:19 PM
Wayne....The tree to the right bothers me some....too weighty. But everything else is wonderful! What a sky!!! Jim

Wayne Gaudon
04-27-2003, 09:05 PM
Mark .. messed up some of the leaves so the trees would fade off more

Scott .. lost the Carribean sky .. can't have that in Canada :D

Jim .. added some space between to lighten it up a little

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/27-Apr-2003/5946-spring5.jpg

artinoils
04-28-2003, 04:18 AM
Wayne, the color and light is very nice but I can't help feeling something is missing in the composition. Maybe a fallen branch or a person on the path...I dunno...what do you think?

soap
04-28-2003, 05:31 AM
I love the path, with the sun beams on it.
I find something is missing too -it is too vertical - could do with a stronger diagonal maybe?
am no expert....

Wayne Gaudon
04-28-2003, 07:52 AM
thanks artinoils and soap .. I don't think anything is missing but who knows .. anyway .. it's a done deal at this time .. perhaps the diagnol composition, being different, is troubling to both of you.