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SabZero
04-25-2003, 08:33 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-25-2003/21610_boat_indonesia_ref.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-25-2003/21610_boat_indonesia_ip02.jpg

http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-25-2003/21610_boat_indonesia_ip01.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Indonesian boat
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Watercolor Paper
Dimension: A4
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
A work in progress for the project of marinas and boats. This is my third acrylic painting, using the primary and secondary colours (given by Talens on their website).

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Any pointers welcome - approach to subject and execution, choice of colours etc.

SabZero
04-27-2003, 10:54 AM
Well, I finished it. Any comments are appreciated! :)

soap
04-28-2003, 05:35 AM
Like it. Like the way you handle the paint.
I'd wish for some more tones and values in your colours though. It is a little 'flat' to me now.
But that might be just the way you wanted this.

SabZero
04-28-2003, 09:43 AM
soap, you are right - it needs more variety in tones. It's just that I painted over an ugly green on the boat I had painted on before, and now there is a thick layer of paint which I find not so compelling painting over again... I think I need to plan ahead a little bit more. Also, a coloured reference to look at, heh ;)
Thanks for the input!