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woodguy
04-24-2003, 08:31 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-24-2003/5058_P1010028.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: "Quiet Street"
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Oil
Surface: Wood
Dimension: 20 x 16
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
I do not think that this is done....maybe you can helpme here! Somehow this got post in it's early stage in the thread "Rise and Shine". Don't know how that happened, but if you are curious you can see where this one late last night.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Comments and suggestions welcomed. Jim

coulter
04-24-2003, 08:48 PM
Great mystery and simplicity Jim!

Yeah, needs something.... I'm gonna suggest darkening the foreground shadows and trying to recapture some of the atmospherics in the distance that you had in the initial version.

Mark

jerryW
04-24-2003, 11:14 PM
Originally posted by coulter
Great mystery and simplicity Jim!


yes and geometrics and positive negative with a twist

Niv
04-25-2003, 09:53 AM
The mood and simplicity is really nice. Has a Hopper feel to it - a sense of loneliness.

woodguy
04-25-2003, 05:38 PM
Mark, Jerry and Kevin...Thanks for your comments and input. I think that I am going to let this dry for a day or two and then do some glazing and maybe add a figure or something else of interest on the street. I like the composition but other than that it is boring! Thanks again. Jim