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Line
04-24-2003, 12:36 PM
What do you think? :) Did it during Easter :) Any comments?

pencils4me
04-24-2003, 01:03 PM
hey ya

I see strong lights and shadows, some nice line work too. Over all a nice practice piece for all the above plus the horse its self.

:D

TJ

Line
04-24-2003, 01:06 PM
Thank you :) Something about the muzzle is bothering me, though...

pencils4me
04-24-2003, 01:18 PM
it could use a little more shading to difine the shape better. thats probably what your seeing. the muzzel as it is just drops off at the end of the face, where there are really variances there too. Do you have a refrence pic your using?

TJ

Line
04-24-2003, 01:19 PM
Well, I have it in a book...

RachelG*
04-24-2003, 04:16 PM
I think this looks good. the thing i see off in the muzzle is the nostrils. they are two different shapes. maybe rounding the tapred one or visa versa would help. great job with the ink!!

Suzy78
04-26-2003, 02:51 PM
Keep practicing! You've really improved since the first piece I saw that you posted. You have very strong contrast, and might want to consider adding some more shading to add detail to this piece. The muzzle seems a bit "thick" in relation to the rest of the horse's head. The top half looks relatively Arab, while the muzzle looks less refined. I really like that you're trying pen and ink and pencil. Don't forget about colored pencil, too! ;)

Suzy

Line
04-26-2003, 03:29 PM
Suzy, want me to post an arab I did in colored pencil? ;) It kinda sucks though... :lol:

lorna12
04-26-2003, 03:49 PM
Nice job!! For what it's worth, I noticed the nostrils right off, too. The left (ours) seems larger than the right one.

shedreamsbig
04-27-2003, 01:05 AM
Very nice Line!!

I am so proud of you!! You are showing improvment every time you post another!!! Keep it up!!

Christina

Line
04-27-2003, 05:44 AM
*blushes at Christina* :)

Paul Hopkinson
04-27-2003, 07:58 AM
Nice one line! Excellent control of the pens.

Paul:D