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Bloodthirsty
04-23-2003, 03:56 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-23-2003/21226_uni.gif


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: unicorn!
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Pencil
Surface: Paper
Dimension: about 23X30.5 cm
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Etch, it's very bland and although I can see about a bazillion mistakes with it, I'm still abnormally proud of it. It was my very first try at a unicorn.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Well, done in the summer, late at night, and it took my longer than I'd like to admit.

For critiquing: Anything goes. Tell me what you like about it, what you think is awful about it, and what you think I could do to improve.

bocote
04-23-2003, 07:38 PM
this is a great work. I dont really have a list of what I like about it or what I dont like. line intensity works well yet the light shading gives debth. Your portrayal of a unicorn is different than mine yet it'd be foolish of me to comment on our differences of a mythical animal :)

nice stuff,

Bocote

Wayne Gaudon
04-23-2003, 09:16 PM
cute in it's own kind of way .. has a happy feel to it.