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Anonymous
04-22-2003, 10:53 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-22-2003/7974_art_by160.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: arena
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 11x15
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
different subject.....

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
what is it missing?

jerryW
04-23-2003, 06:51 AM
ordie4?

nothing missing, though I've seen you have more fun just for the sake of it.

keeping it simple is important however, and walking a fine line is a big job.

what ever you do, there is a net-simplicity that is worth preserving.

s-augustson
04-23-2003, 08:26 AM
I thought it was designditz :)

Whoever it is, I like the angle of the painting. I can hear that last power chord ringing out!

ordie4
04-23-2003, 05:56 PM
jerry wins

....jerry could you elaborate. i'm a bit confused as to your comments....perhap dim, you might say! ;-)

shawn - thanks (btw just am catching up, but those b&w you posted were very impressive)

i was hoping to get some ideas. this one, in my mind looked so good....then i started painting and right away was unhappy with it. never could quite reign it in either. anyone who'd like to bash it, feel free it would be a help. even though it looks better in person, i think it could be taken in a better direction.

o4