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santanuke
04-21-2003, 07:10 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-21-2003/9982_Face.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: An imaginitive girl
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Colored Pencil
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 8 inch X 10 inch
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This is an image of an imaginitive girl of 16 years age. I have tried to capture the mood using colored pencil.
Viewers are invited to pass their valuable comments on technique, idea and over all success of the picture.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
What improvements can be possible on this image?

What improvement is required in terms of skill?

Wayne Gaudon
04-21-2003, 09:47 AM
no answers .. I like this and if done from imagination it's quite well done.

jerryW
04-21-2003, 10:27 AM
for some time I struggled to differentiate mahayana from hinayana, one being the great vehicle and the other being the lesser vehicle - but both navigating to the same goal of enlightenment.

now having settled on painting as a medium I consider it 'my' great vehicle, and casually refer to partial coverage of the rectangular plane as a lesser vehicle. This is not fair.
but in the context of the medium I think you have done a superlative job.

had you selected a more difficult path, the fruit of your labour would be even sweeter. This is enough to satisfy and amaze.