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Wayne Gaudon
04-19-2003, 10:27 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-19-2003/5946_Spring4.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Shacks
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Oil
Surface: Board
Dimension: 11 x 14
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
messing with white ..

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
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designditz
04-19-2003, 11:49 PM
I like it..maybe just a bit more shading on the shack to seperate it from the snow on the ground? i love the colors in the leaves of the tree in the forground... lovely work as usual :)

bocote
04-20-2003, 12:33 AM
no questions so I'll just comment. I'm happy with this work. the whites on the barn and ground work well with me. The brush and knife strokes are attractive. The highlights of the tree on the left seem to be solid. The background is lacking both in debth and it looks rushed and a bit muddy in areas.

Looking at it a 3rd time I really like the barn and everything infront of it, but the background I dont particulary like. the paint in the foreground is interesting and "careful" whereas the background is more half hazard and "sketched".


http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/20-Apr-2003/21291-barn.jpg

have fun,

Bocote