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Rich Williams
04-19-2003, 04:52 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-19-2003/3995_Cittycolmansea500.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Blackline Comming
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 16
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This is a WIP and I am working on the light coming directly at the viewer. There is a sail boat to be placed into the painting to the right of the sun reflections.
The day we were on the water you could see the black line coming across the water that indicates that a strong wind is about to come up and a warning to get off the sea if you are not in a good sized water craft.



MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
If any do you see any design problems with the way the painting is laid out.

woodguy
04-19-2003, 05:25 PM
Hello Rich.....Good start. Great sky. Layout is good but could change depending on what happens with the sailboat! Jim

Wayne Gaudon
04-19-2003, 10:25 PM
looking good ..

designditz
04-19-2003, 11:51 PM
i am loving your color choices so far...!

bocote
04-20-2003, 12:23 AM
specifically answering your question on the layout working. I cant put my thumb on the problems if any on the cohension of the units in this work. The light coming from the water is semi ambiguous and I am confused a tad. I'm very happy with the clouds and water waves, but perhaps the lighting contrast on the water is a bit too much.

please share the final version.

have fun,

Bocote

pampe
04-20-2003, 01:42 PM
very rich, Rich

keep at it

jerryW
04-21-2003, 10:31 AM
seems that you are compositing.
so far it is sheared across the middle
will peek again when finished.

Rich Williams
04-21-2003, 09:56 PM
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Community/images/21-Apr-2003/3995-Cittycolmansea2500.JPG
Thanks for your comments and will look at what you were saying Jerry.

Finished it up for now and will now let it sit for a few days to see if anything comes to my attention. If you see something please let me know.

Rich