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04-19-2003, 05:32 AM
Title: After the Bath
Year Created: 2003
Dimension: 24 x 12?
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!
Figure class done over 3 classes.
Was going for acurate color and pose.
MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
critique please/comments too.
04-19-2003, 09:27 AM
you are the new HOPPER.
04-19-2003, 10:08 AM
Originally posted by jerryW
you are the new HOPPER.
fresh. and unbelievably good :clap:
04-19-2003, 10:16 AM
I too think this is very very good.
04-19-2003, 12:42 PM
Susan...so well rendered...beautiful!:clap: :clap: :clap:
04-19-2003, 02:40 PM
Nice relaxed looking pose..........like the way you have handled the subject. Just wondering about the green shadow under her left breast......looks a little flat maybe, although in reality there may be a delicate shift in tone to describe the shape of her body. It doesn't detract really, just a thought.
How do YOU feel about the picture, as a whole ?
04-20-2003, 12:39 AM
This is good work. nice shadow and good feeling of space I get from this. Colors work well and I'm intrigued. You say that you were working on color and pose and you have done very well. The only thing I can say that is not premium is the upper lip of the woman... its a tad big.
04-20-2003, 08:12 AM
very nice painting..i like ur compoisition and colors
04-20-2003, 01:45 PM
all those years of cc's and mg's were wasted....this is where you belong!
04-21-2003, 09:32 AM
What a great painting, love the painterly quality and her stance!
I think the feet might be a tad small compared to hands and head, but it'll easily still "stand" on it's own:D
04-21-2003, 09:49 AM
grumpy looking mama .. but a nice painting .. my one little .. very little nit .. the knee is rather flat in appearance ..
04-22-2003, 01:39 AM
Jerry, Hopper as in lonely subject?
mark, ginette, cathleen:D
Andy, there are things I would have refined a bit more with more time...but times up. Overall I'm happy with it. That's the beauty of painting...never perfect...always leads you onward to do a better one.
qaziasif, thank you.
Pam, cc's and mg's pay the bills so I can paint.;)
Luzie, probably small but she was petite. A dancer.
Wayne, grumpy yes...posing while in pain. Knee simply done...didn't know you're a leg man.:D
04-22-2003, 11:07 AM
artinoils .. LOL
.. nothing else to see
.. you have too big a bandaid on the lady! :evil:
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