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2003maryann
04-18-2003, 02:24 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-18-2003/20472_boy_drinking_form_a_cup_-_post_on_site.JPG


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Boy Drinking From a Cup
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 6x9
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Enhancement from "Almost Finished Alfie" without the Dog.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Color and use of contrast?

andyvry
04-18-2003, 02:42 PM
Hi mary ann,

yeah I like this study,,, the composition, contrast and the use of color all look well on my monitor.........the only crit I have is a minor one........his thighs look a little flat to me; lacking in shape or roundness I mean. Think this could easily be remedied.......Nice work. :)

andy.

2003maryann
04-23-2003, 09:51 AM
Thank y ou Andy for your critique. I tried a watercolor first on this and he most definitely is sitting in that one. I will try again to put hinm on the bed.

pampe
04-23-2003, 04:44 PM
this is a lovely study, Mary Ann...you should visit over in the watercolor forum


agree about the need for volume in his upper legs