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designditz
04-17-2003, 06:27 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-17-2003/12528_bluehaze.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Blue Haze
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 14x17
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Another piece done in watercolor pencil and watercolors...messing around with backrounds.. fun :)

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
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s-augustson
04-17-2003, 06:59 PM
nice shapes. i hope that doesnt sound bad. i do think though that the top looks heavier than the bottom. with all the hair maybe it causes me to see it unbalanced. if that makes any sense.

goes a little further down than your normal poses.

designditz
04-17-2003, 10:02 PM
Yes what you said makes sense :)...i was kinda trying to evoke movement...thus the hair looks big...but was trying to pull off a swinging motion...maybe not...yes the figure is shown further down...

loop
04-21-2003, 12:58 PM
I do like where you are going with your backgrounds !

I don'tthink you pulled off the moving hair though, It might be too neat to be moving ?? hmmm don't know

and I think she gets down therre too soon as she seems a little squat (missing stomach or something) unless that's the new plastic surgery fad in Cali ??;)

jerryW
04-21-2003, 05:37 PM
the body is so short in comparison to the hairdoo.
I think now is a great time to shift into painting from the inside out ( a break form outlined form). except while on the phone when outlined form is exquisite.
you know your stuff.

designditz
04-21-2003, 06:06 PM
Yes you are all correct.. her body looks stunted in comparison to the hair...
loop, havent heard of a plastic surgeon yet that can shorten you ! :)
jerry...okay..perhaps... :)