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rakshakh
04-16-2003, 06:04 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-16-2003/20748_oil3.jpeg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: steady water
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 18X24
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
this is my second oil painting done.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
any comments on the painting like
1.use of paints
2.Mountains
3.clouds
4. trees
5.Strokes
6.composition
7.color
are welcome

jerryW
04-16-2003, 06:32 PM
strong localized complexes separated by water and land, as if there are more than one painting on one canvas. still the joy of teh activity comes through

Helen Zapata
04-16-2003, 07:11 PM
It reminds me of a Japanese painting. :)

Patrick1
04-16-2003, 10:45 PM
Nice for a second oil painting. The colours are bold yet tasteful. I like the look of distance to the hills in front of the mountains.

Murals By Aga
04-16-2003, 11:59 PM
Good try! I like the perspective in your painting. My suggestion for you is to think about including some of colors of the trees in their reflextion provided by the water.