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jackart
04-11-2003, 11:40 AM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-11-2003/14799_ctyt1.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: city 1
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 60
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
This is my first city-scape. I was anxious to see what it would look like in my style.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Does it work, first off as a city-scape, and does the altered composition make it more, or less interesting as an image?

Gia
04-11-2003, 01:09 PM
very interesting technique.....I don't feel so comfortable with the composition..makes me want to tilt my head to the right when
viewing in other words maybe you should have done the
suggested street horizontally, just a thought

Gilberte
04-11-2003, 03:49 PM
When I turn my head to the right ... a lot ... it looks okay !

Wayne Gaudon
04-11-2003, 04:33 PM
makes me dizzy but I still like it.

artinoils
04-11-2003, 06:07 PM
The technique I like. Interesting....like the use of lines and color...not crazy about the tilt. Nice work.

Luzie
04-11-2003, 09:23 PM
Gives me an "underwater feeling", like this , a little van goghish?
Lots of energy.
The tilt, well I guess I would hang it tilted to have it straight:D

coulter
04-11-2003, 10:12 PM
I really didn't think I'd like it, but I love it, I even like the tilt. A very different thing for me to like, I think you've done a great job here!

Mark

jerryW
04-12-2003, 04:37 AM
deja vu?
maybe I have, but
I do like the way the universes converge in this.
just the right touch, not easy to sustain this
type of integration.

designditz
04-12-2003, 04:41 AM
I really like it.. I do have the urge to tilt my head but why? This is great art!:clap:

johno
04-12-2003, 05:53 AM
well i am no expert but i know what i like, and i like this a lot
and i particularly like the lights . as for the tilt , i think it suits this picture being sort of abstract and architectural.

andyvry
04-12-2003, 11:19 AM
For the most part I think this a grand picture although I find the 'tilt' somewhat intimidating........Perhaps I have vertigo and never realised it......:D

andy.