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JeanineJ
04-10-2003, 11:39 PM
MY IMAGE(S):
http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/upload_spool/04-10-2003/2904_FemaleNudeStudy.jpg


GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Holding On
Year Created: 2003
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 24
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Three hour live model study from tonight's class.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Anything?

andyvry
04-11-2003, 04:19 AM
Very nice......................

Is it a man or a woman?

andy.

Lines
04-11-2003, 04:33 AM
Very nice, I particularly like the scene which
seems set in some fantasy or dreamworld.
Works very well.

Murals By Aga
04-11-2003, 09:07 AM
It's a woman....has breasts ;)
What is the solid looking mass on the left side of the painting? Can't decide weather I like it or not. Maybe you could put in a little more shadows by her feet and behind her, on the ground. That way she will feel more grounded on the floor.
I love the contour of her back and its contrast with the pale background.

JeanineJ
04-11-2003, 11:32 AM
Originally posted by Murals By Aga
It's a woman....has breasts ;)
What is the solid looking mass on the left side of the painting? Can't decide weather I like it or not. Maybe you could put in a little more shadows by her feet and behind her, on the ground. That way she will feel more grounded on the floor.
I love the contour of her back and its contrast with the pale background.

Thank you for comments!

Aga, the "mass" on the left is supposed to be drapery. I will add finishing touches to clarify that and include your spot-on suggestions. The time flew last night. I thought we were getting one more 20-minute pose when everyone cleared out, leaving me with no finale!

Paintonbrush
04-11-2003, 01:14 PM
fascinating...nice work.....the left side cropped off would be ok....its great as is too