Strong Points:

• What a beautiful piece of work! So refreshing to see so much depth. It gives such a mystical feeling.
• There is great movement by the way you placed their arms and legs. I really enjoyed it.
• You managed to convey the feeling of floating in space. This is what gives it such a nice look.
  

The image to the left is an electronically enhanced copy, with the suggestions of the critique staff incorporated directly into the image.

Specific comments are below.

Areas to work on:

I have two comments.

Be careful not to crop a human figure at the joints. In other words either cut off below or higher than the knee, elbow, waist, ankle, wrist etc.

The other comment is try to avoid dividing your picture plane in half by placing an element whose boundary begins in the center. Look at your male figure; the right side of his body practically runs through the middle. I cropped the picture to cut of just above the knee and now the male figure is more towards the right of the picture thus allowing for a better balance.

The improvements are minimal but a masterpiece is achieved by many little details summed up.

Additional comments:

Good work! I would like to see more of your work for my own personal enjoyment.