From the artist: I have been painting off and on for the last 2 years. This is the first portrait I have ever done, it is a copy of an Italian renaissance painting of which I had a small picture in a book. The painting is about 8'x11" and it is done in oils. It took forever to do it but I am fairly pleased with the result. I would appreciate very much your honest opinion. Thank you so much, Leontine van der Meer

The Learning Gallery: Italian Portrait
Your Original	Strong Points: Well done!

My Modified Version

Areas to Work On: Only one observation. You have the contour of his hat and part of his forehead "kiss" the edges of the frame. Leave more breathing space. Otherwise it seems like the head is placed tightly in box.

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