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Oil on paper 16"x12". I think that I may have overdone the image of reflections. What do you think?

The Learning Gallery: Reflections

Your Original
 Strong Points:
  • The reflections are fine.


My Modified Version
 Areas to Work On:
  • You may want to diffuse the highlight on the mountain on the left in the water a bit more.
  • What I feel is too strong is the value and the color of the blue in the sky.
  • I would also add more color to the trees to avoid too much of a grayed look.
  • Add some warm ochre or orange in the clouds to offset the cool sky as well.
  • Take a look at my modifications.

Additional comments:

Excellent job!

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