My Modified Version
|Areas to Work On / My Modifications:
- The rock looks too flat topped. Try not to have straight horizontal (or vertical) lines that run parallel to the frame.
- Also reduce the amount of flowers. Just a few near the boat will say enough. I've taken the liberty of removing some of them in my version. Remember, less is more. Like using spices. Just a touch will enhance the flavor, too much will spoil the dish. :-)
- Don't have subjects pointing outward of the picture. The boat's hull in your original is pointing towards the frame. I flipped it to a mirror image. Now it's pointing the opposite way, into the picture. Viewers unconciously tend to wander out of the picture visually when we point in the wrong direction.