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Boy oh boy I feel like sinking my teeth into the fruit! The strong points in the original painting are:
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The images to the left are electronically enhanced copies, with the suggestions of the critiquers incorporated directly into the image. Specific comments are below. |
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Areas to work
on: The wine glass seems to look invisible in the middle (that could be the photo). A few strokes of light and reflection will correct that. The spout of the tea pot seems a bit off. You may want to add a bit more light to the grapes hanging over the oranges to separate them from the ones on the left (see my modification). You will achieve better color harmony by adding some hints of green on the tea pot and in the shadows of the table cloth. Reflected color will justify this. I also added a shadow on the bowl behind the overhanging grapes since that area would receive less light. Also I darkened the bottom of the bowl to make it look more three-dimensional. I worked on the spout. The bowl and the tea pot are a bit more into perspective now. Additional
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